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Friday, 24 October 2014

direct speech.rtf

Task One
Put the speech marks in the correct places. Remember: The speech marks go around what is being said.

  1. “Hello,” said the man.

  1. “What are you doing?” said Fred.

  1. “Stop!” shouted the policeman.

  1. ”Wait a minute, said Mark.” Don’t I know you from somewhere?

  1. ”I know what we’ll do, said Lucy.” We’ll go to the pictures.

Sparks the story

This week I read the story sparks and made a story map about it.

In the morning it was Dillon’s seventh birthday.

He runs down the hall.

He opened his present it was a scooter that shoots sparks.


He wants to bring it to bed but his mum says NO! So he sleeps under his bed with it.


When Dillon goes to the party Dillon's big brother steals his scooter.


Mum drops her fork and says i need to teach my son to share.


The parents fight all night but spoke about it
and they sorted it out.





Monday, 13 October 2014

Google Maps - NZ Cities

Today I have been learning about where the cities in NZ can be found. I made a Google map to show my learning.

Friday, 26 September 2014

Monday, 22 September 2014

Tuesday, 19 August 2014

Description - Wolf

The wolf

WALT: describe

Remember to:
  • use looks, actions and characteristics
  • use describing words
  • similes and metaphors
  • paragraphs (from planning sheet)
The big bad wolf is better known to be a werewolf. He is probably the best at being sneaky. He will steal your shoes but only to find evidence to see if you are in trouble. Deep inside that fur ball, he is actually very nice.    

The wolf has teeth as sharp as knives and eyes that glowing like glow worms in a cave. His fur is the colour of a blackberry and is as soft as a marshmallow. The Big Bad Wolf in the middle of the night is as big as a skyscraper but really he is the size of a horse.

Being helpful is very hard for the Big Bad Wolf because he always gets into trouble. Once he tried to help Grandma (she asked for help) by dressing up as her but instead of helping find a thief, he ended up badly hurt by a woodcutter.     

So the next time you you are in trouble, even if he asks you, don't let the Big Bad Wolf help. He will ended up getting your whole family in trouble.    

Monday, 18 August 2014

Positive Blog Comments

Today I have been learning about how to give positive blog comments. I have remember to ask questions and to say why I liked the post.

Hi Lolo,
I love it because one, I LOVE MINECRAFT TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! second, I like the details.
Did you know that if you hit lots a zombie pigman in the range of five blocks they will all attack you?
From Mashall