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Monday 9 June 2014

Monsters




Monday 17th March

WALT: describe

Remember to:
  • use your senses  ( what they look, sound, feel, smell like)
  • use wow words to help the reader make a picture of the monster in their head.
  • re-read your work to check your description is complete..                                                                              


One night I was in a deep dark woods and suddenly I smelt a horrible stinky smell. I kept walking and the smell got stronger. Then it appeared.The monster was big and fat.I yelled  but it was too late i died (ow! blar!)                                                     

1 comment:

  1. Good job, But maybe next time you could put the font into a smaller size???

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